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Lore99V
9 Jun 2018
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VShaii
9 Jun 2018
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Say “In ancient Japan, there were women called Geisha who entertained their guests with their talents.” Also, spell “tradicional” as “traditional”. It is also “Japanese” not “Japonese”.
Change it to “Geishas lived in “Okiya”, where they learned to become Geishas.”
Also change it to “their outfits were made of “Kimono”, which were tied by an “obi”. Their makeup was made of a white base(made out of lead) and it was put on the hands, face, neck and chest, leaving the nape clean. They made up the lips with red stains and they used charcoal to make their eyes stand out.” Change “colled” to “coiled”.
“Now, Geishas still exist but their numbers have decreased.”
I tried to keep the vocabulary basic and not change it too much, hope this helped!
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Lore99V
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